Haiku moment
Haiku moment
Posted by Magdalena Dale Wed, Jun 17th 2009, 18:31


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Thank you for your poems.
I like very much the sea, the rocks and the shells too. To be alone on the rocks listen to the sea it was one of my favorite moments this year.
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 04:51  
  
May I add two lines?

resonant waves
convincing shells and rocks
nothing goes away - Rebba Singh

only some albatross flying
between my solitude and the sea - Magdalena Dale

Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 06:57  
  
resonant waves
convincing shells and rocks
nothing goes away - Rebba Singh

only some albatross flying
between my solitude and the sea - Magdalena Dale

spring dawn ~
gold-fishes dance on
the ruby sky - Narayanan Raghunathant

together with moon
I listen to the silence – Magdalena Dale
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 07:23  
  
resonant waves
convincing shells and rocks
nothing goes away - Rebba Singh

only some albatross flying
between my solitude and the sea - Magdalena Dale

spring dawn ~
gold-fishes dance on
the ruby sky - Narayanan Raghunathant

together with moon
I listen to the silence – Magdalena Dale

a pensive little
girl by the pond ~
breaking, casting twigs - Nanda Kumar

the light of a swan
among the white flowers – Magdalena Dale


Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 07:35  
  
I am a little confused! What are we doing here a renku or what else? Each poem inspired me, but I had to go out and I am behindhand with my answer.
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 11:34  
  
resonant waves
convincing shells and rocks
nothing goes away - Rebba Singh

only some albatross flying
between my solitude and the sea - Magdalena Dale

spring dawn ~
gold-fishes dance on
the ruby sky - Narayanan Raghunathan

together with moon
I listen to the silence – Magdalena Dale

a pensive little
girl by the pond ~
breaking, casting twigs - Nanda Kumar

the light of a swan
among the white flowers – Magdalena Dale

two bright stars
in the pre-dawn sky...
the hum of traffic - Keith A. Simmonds

the fragrance of lime
unfolds my memories – Magdalena Dale

Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 11:41  
  
Thank you, I like their poems, but are too many people for a renku! Where are the poems only yours and mine? You deleted them? Thanks God, I saved them, because i would to answer you. Your last haiku had to be mine and then you will answer if you wish with two lines.

This is what I try to answer you but you are faster.

"I see. I think the best form is only with your poems and yours. The other poems are nice, but the last is better linked. So, we can try a junicho, which are 12 verses on 1 side. But I know we had to change between us and I will write haiku and your answer will be in two line if you wish".
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 12:15  
  
Give my a little time to see what can I do and we will write a junicho if you agree.
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 12:16  
  
Here you are all about renku:

http://uk.geocities.com/johnedmundcarley@btinternet.com/Common_Types.htm
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 12:31  
  
Excuse me, but here I can't put a link. But you can copy and paste in your browser.
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 12:40  
  
Oh, I am not so good! But I wrote a renga book with the poet Vasile Moldovan and I am member of a renku group but I am still learning. I get the link about renku by Norman Darlington. He sent us to learn. You see? I am not sure when is renga and when is renku. We will learn together writing linked verses.
Thank you!
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 12:55  
  
Thank you!
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 19th 2009, 13:48  
  
I surely think this page which i accidentally chanced into needs to be on the site home page once again!
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Aug 25th 2010, 09:48  
  
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