Thank you for your poems.
I like very much the sea, the rocks and the shells too. To be alone on the rocks listen to the sea it was one of my favorite moments this year.
Thank you, I like their poems, but are too many people for a renku! Where are the poems only yours and mine? You deleted them? Thanks God, I saved them, because i would to answer you. Your last haiku had to be mine and then you will answer if you wish with two lines.
This is what I try to answer you but you are faster.
"I see. I think the best form is only with your poems and yours. The other poems are nice, but the last is better linked. So, we can try a junicho, which are 12 verses on 1 side. But I know we had to change between us and I will write haiku and your answer will be in two line if you wish".
Oh, I am not so good! But I wrote a renga book with the poet Vasile Moldovan and I am member of a renku group but I am still learning. I get the link about renku by Norman Darlington. He sent us to learn. You see? I am not sure when is renga and when is renku. We will learn together writing linked verses.
Thank you!
I like very much the sea, the rocks and the shells too. To be alone on the rocks listen to the sea it was one of my favorite moments this year.
resonant waves
convincing shells and rocks
nothing goes away - Rebba Singh
only some albatross flying
between my solitude and the sea - Magdalena Dale
convincing shells and rocks
nothing goes away - Rebba Singh
only some albatross flying
between my solitude and the sea - Magdalena Dale
spring dawn ~
gold-fishes dance on
the ruby sky - Narayanan Raghunathant
together with moon
I listen to the silence – Magdalena Dale
convincing shells and rocks
nothing goes away - Rebba Singh
only some albatross flying
between my solitude and the sea - Magdalena Dale
spring dawn ~
gold-fishes dance on
the ruby sky - Narayanan Raghunathant
together with moon
I listen to the silence – Magdalena Dale
a pensive little
girl by the pond ~
breaking, casting twigs - Nanda Kumar
the light of a swan
among the white flowers – Magdalena Dale
convincing shells and rocks
nothing goes away - Rebba Singh
only some albatross flying
between my solitude and the sea - Magdalena Dale
spring dawn ~
gold-fishes dance on
the ruby sky - Narayanan Raghunathan
together with moon
I listen to the silence – Magdalena Dale
a pensive little
girl by the pond ~
breaking, casting twigs - Nanda Kumar
the light of a swan
among the white flowers – Magdalena Dale
two bright stars
in the pre-dawn sky...
the hum of traffic - Keith A. Simmonds
the fragrance of lime
unfolds my memories – Magdalena Dale
This is what I try to answer you but you are faster.
"I see. I think the best form is only with your poems and yours. The other poems are nice, but the last is better linked. So, we can try a junicho, which are 12 verses on 1 side. But I know we had to change between us and I will write haiku and your answer will be in two line if you wish".
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Thank you!