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Voices
 
Posted by Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Jan 9th 2010, 11:21 :: English
a winter moon
hangs over the village ~
subdued voices
Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Sun, Jan 10th 2010, 00:03

sardiion ka chaand 

laTke gaanv par ~

dabbi aawaazein 


  

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this haiku kind of whispers...'an extremely cold winter'...Keith!
Rebba Singh Sun, Jan 10th 2010, 10:33  
  

Yes, indeed, Rebba! This year's winter is quite extreme to say the least. Thaks for the Hindi translation.
Keith A. Simmonds Sun, Jan 10th 2010, 15:54  
  

Very subdued and really evocative Keith as Rebba says.

The merging of the "visual" and the "auditory" senses is brilliant here.
Narayanan Raghunathan Mon, Jan 11th 2010, 01:07  
  

Many thanks for your sensitive comments about this piece, Narayanan!
Keith A. Simmonds Mon, Jan 11th 2010, 07:19  
  

These words are very delicately hung over the silences, Keith! Well done!
Shyam Santhanam Fri, Feb 5th 2010, 00:46  
  

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