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a pair of cranes
Posted by
Chèvrefeuille
Mon, Oct 31st 2011, 09:31 :: English
a pair of cranes
flying together through the morning clouds
ah! what a sight
Dutch translation by
Chèvrefeuille
. Posted on Tue, Nov 1st 2011, 06:01
een paar kraanvogels
vliegt samen door de ochtendwolken
adembenemend
French translation by
Chèvrefeuille
. Posted on Tue, Nov 1st 2011, 06:02
translation deleted
translation by
Chèvrefeuille
. Posted on Tue, Nov 1st 2011, 06:03
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A pleasant haiku, Chevrefeuille. The haijin's surprise comes through.
Shyam Santhanam
Mon, Oct 31st 2011, 19:55
Thank you for this comment. I wasn't certain of this one, because I never use 'Ah!' or 'Oh!', but I had to try it.
Chèvrefeuille
Tue, Nov 1st 2011, 05:52
The exclamation is surely effective here Chèvrefeuille.
Shyam Santhanam
Thu, Nov 3rd 2011, 13:04
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