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winter fever...
walking on bare feet through
the heaps of snow
Vasile Moldovan Wed, Dec 28th 2011, 04:14  
  
A beautiful, serendipitous haibun!
A good response from Vasile too.
Shyam Santhanam Tue, Jan 3rd 2012, 10:26  
  
Slight corrections:
"Summer’s" -> "Summer"
"I didn’t know about haibun and haiku or what form of poetry." -> "I didn’t know about haibun and haiku or any form of poetry."
Shyam Santhanam Tue, Jan 3rd 2012, 10:27  
  
Hello Vasile and Shyam, thank you for your kind comments here. Thank you Vasile for the nice haiku you have written as a response.
Shyam thank you for the corrections. English isn't my maiden language, but I try to write the English as well as I can. I have to learn, so corrections on my English isn't a problem.
Thank you so much.

Namaste
Chèvrefeuille Tue, Jan 3rd 2012, 12:16  
  
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