Very memorable Spiros! The word 'notable' is specially notable!!
Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Nov 27th 2012, 12:14  
..thanks Narayanan..! i'm pleased you like this one..

Spiros Zafiris Tue, Nov 27th 2012, 14:21  
..i wonder which one is preferred:

walking faster--
both with notable scarves,
man and dog

walking faster
both notably scarved,
man and dog

walking faster
both scarved notably,
man and dog
..(C)2012 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram
..i think i prefer the second of the three
Spiros Zafiris Wed, Nov 28th 2012, 23:47  
I would prefer the first one Spiros! I think "scarves" as a plural noun is preferable to "scarved" as a verb used to adjectify! I Think we could ask for Keith's opinion too.
Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, Nov 29th 2012, 00:02  
.thanks very much Narayanan..i truly appreciate
your opinion..not sure what i'll do..i've asked
some poets in a few other sites about this
(not usually so indecisive)..i kinda like "notably
scarved" cause it reads slightly more melodic
..and the line is shortened by one syllable
while still remaining S/L/S..thanks very much..

Spiros Zafiris Thu, Nov 29th 2012, 00:20  
yes :) good one
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