Very remarkable Haiku with a powerful closure "asleep" ~ Personally, I might have preferred a more personal "voice" to the abstract word "sound" in the second line ~ Of course that is just a personal comment in passing ~
Pardon me Simon Hanson ~ I did not notice the pun on the word "sound" in the usage "sound asleep" ~ Of course, now I recognize with unvoiced apologies, that it must be "sound" and not "voice" ~ because obviously "sound" serves as an adjective, a verbo-noun(!) in some strange meta etymological wonder-way ~
~ Great Gratitude you posted this Haiku here on our site senor Simon Hanson ~
~ Great Gratitude you posted this Haiku here on our site senor Simon Hanson ~