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very interesting malini…
…a seasonal journey of self realization
i have enjoyed teasing the self into realization :
‘bit’ by ‘bit’ ?
or should I say ‘bite’ by 'bite' ?
better still 'byte' by 'byte'
rebba Wed, Aug 27th 2008, 02:39  
  

Thanks Rebba. I have enjoyed reading your many translations. It is a formidable task to translate work and keep the same feeling intact and you do that so well!
Malini Rao Fri, Aug 29th 2008, 14:20  
  

thank you malini...
i feel honored ~

i respond to your words ~


baahaar-o-khiza-o-zameen
mein bhi dum nahin ~ phir rang hain
dabay dhardkan-e-hanooz mein he


bahaar - springtime
khiza - fall ~ autumn
zameen - earth
mein - in
dum - life
nahin - not
mein dum nahin - transience
phir - then
rang pronounced ra-ang - colors
hain - are
dabay - buried
dhardkan - heart beat / pulse / vibration
hanooz - immortal permanence
mein he - only in
the ellipsis - '-o-' stands for and
'-e-' is pronounced as in the alphabet A - means 'of' ~ in my translations...generally...

seasonal upheaval
is transient ~ permanence
vibrates Only from within


i humbly vibrate in harmony as One with you and all that exists eternally
rebba Sat, Aug 30th 2008, 01:21  
  

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