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Moonlight / Lumina lunii
 
Posted by Magdalena Dale Mon, Jun 4th 2007, 12:13 ::

Moon covered when
your moonish longing
make my nights moonless...
only a single moonbeam
keeps my moon over you

Romanian

luna sub nouri
când dorul tău capricios
mi-alungă lumina...
doar o rază de lună
îmi înţelege-aleanul


 


  

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"moonish" is the spelling you intend I think!
Narayanan Raghunathan Sun, Jun 17th 2007, 01:56  
  
You are right! Thank you!
Magdalena Dale Sun, Jun 17th 2007, 02:26  
  
Dear Magdalena ~ I'm grateful you shared these exquisite tanka. I've read them many times and delighted. They inspired me to write mine.
Shyam Santhanam Sun, Jun 17th 2007, 08:43  
  
Dear Shyam, I am really touched if my poems inspired you to write your poems. I am honored and glad by your words. It means so much for me! Thank you, very much!
Magdalena Dale Sun, Jun 17th 2007, 12:47  
  
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