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alone
Quite alone 
Posted by Vasile Moldovan Sun, Dec 29th 2013, 16:28 :: English

Quite alone

in the New Year night...

not a lamp

only the fireside light

moving shadows on the walls 

Swedish translation by P. Nandakumar Warrier. Posted on Mon, Apr 7th 2014, 06:41
Alldeles ensam
på nyårsnatten
ingen lampa
bara eldens ljus
skuggarna på väggarna

  

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A heartfelt aloneness and even a sort of loneliness ~ new year night when revelries are the expected norm, the poet is alone with the fireside light and shadows. Greetings Vasile, thank you for your continued contributions to WHW. Happy New Year.
Shyam Santhanam Sat, Feb 1st 2014, 02:09  
  
..hello..I like it much too..you may consider
lower-casing 'quite'; is how tanka poets usually
do it in the western world..spiros
~~
Spiros Zafiris Mon, May 26th 2014, 05:23  
  
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