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alone
Quite alone
Posted by
Vasile Moldovan
Sun, Dec 29th 2013, 16:28 :: English
Quite alone
in the New Year night...
not a lamp
only the fireside light
moving shadows on the walls
Swedish translation by
P. Nandakumar Warrier
. Posted on Mon, Apr 7th 2014, 06:41
Alldeles ensam
på nyårsnatten
ingen lampa
bara eldens ljus
skuggarna på väggarna
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A heartfelt aloneness and even a sort of loneliness ~ new year night when revelries are the expected norm, the poet is alone with the fireside light and shadows. Greetings Vasile, thank you for your continued contributions to WHW. Happy New Year.
Shyam Santhanam
Sat, Feb 1st 2014, 02:09
..hello..I like it much too..you may consider
lower-casing 'quite'; is how tanka poets usually
do it in the western world..spiros
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Spiros Zafiris
Mon, May 26th 2014, 05:23
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lower-casing 'quite'; is how tanka poets usually
do it in the western world..spiros
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