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gray skies 
Posted by Cindy Tebo Wed, Dec 3rd 2014, 05:58 :: English

days and days

of gray skies

without rain

sometimes the quiet

is better than the storm

Romanian translation by Vasile Moldovan. Posted on Sat, Dec 6th 2014, 15:30

zile și zile

de văzduh mohorît

fără de ploaie

cîteodată liniștea-i

mai bună ca furtuna


  

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Very strange philosophical closure, expanding the Tanka's inner assonances to hidden subtler dimensions almost unconsciously!
Narayanan Raghunathan Sun, Dec 28th 2014, 16:31  
  
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