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The Stars Above
Posted by
P. Nandakumar Warrier
Wed, Jan 13th 2021, 03:59 :: English
A newborn's future
written in the stars
not in our wild schemes
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A great cosmic piece,Nandakumar ! For greater fluidity, though, I would have written:
A newborn's future
written in the stars
not in our wild schemes
Keith A. Simmonds
Wed, Jan 13th 2021, 15:42
Thank you Keith, yes, this reads much better!
Very nice to hear from you after a while...
P. Nandakumar Warrier
Tue, Jan 19th 2021, 14:15
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A newborn's future
written in the stars
not in our wild schemes
Very nice to hear from you after a while...