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| Posted by Paul Hunter Sat, Jul 15th 2006, 10:13 :: | |||
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trying to write ©2006 Paul Hunter |
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| sounds to me like you are stressed, my brother. A lot must be on your mind. Which,of course you convey in your tanka....your last line is nice and packs a punch. well done, Paul | |
| Robert Wilson Sun, Jul 16th 2006, 23:58 | |
| Thanks Robert. I really appreciate the comments. | |
| Paul Hunter Mon, Jul 17th 2006, 12:52 | |
| This Haiku is very disturbing and the closure is specially suggestive. Take care and best regards Paul. | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Jul 18th 2006, 22:38 | |