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Autumn end
 
Posted by Maria Tirenescu Thu, Aug 31st 2006, 12:26 ::

 


Autumn end.


Under ice, leaves and flower,


Above, the sky,


Like a blue flower,


Catches the eyes.


 


(romanian)


Sfârşit de toamnă.


   Sub gheaţă, frunze şi flori,


   Deasupra, cerul,


   Ca o floare albastră,


   Atrage privirile.


 


  

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Very alluring image space generated in the Tanka. My only doubt is whether some of the commas are necessary ~
Narayanan Raghunathan Sun, Sep 17th 2006, 21:47  
  
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