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| Posted by Maria Tirenescu Thu, Aug 31st 2006, 12:39 :: | |||
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Cloud on sky. Under fence, black cat Spying a sirloin… “Fly, little sirloin!” Shouts, frightened, the child. Un nor pe cer. Sub gard, pisica neagră Pândind o vrabie… „Zboară, vrăbiuţo!” Strigă, speriat, copilul. |
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| Beautiful Tanka ~ Thank you Maria ~ "Shouts, the frightened child" is a better arrangement in my opinion. |
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| Narayanan Raghunathan Fri, Sep 1st 2006, 07:21 | |
| If it’s missing a comma, the meaning is changed. In Romanian, “speriat” is adverb. Not the child is frightened, but its shout. I thank you for your oppinion and time. Respectfully yours! | |
| Maria Tirenescu Sat, Sep 2nd 2006, 14:31 | |