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Threads sand / Firicele de nisip
Posted by
Magdalena Dale
Thu, May 31st 2007, 03:52 ::
Through the empty house
the dust of memories;
our day dreams
thread sand scatter
in the four corners of the earth
Romanian
Prin casa goală
colbul amintirilor;
visele noastre
firicele de nisip
risipite-n patru zări
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Hello Magdalena ~ Slight correction! Please do the necessary. ~~~~~~~~/ Through the empty house / the dust of memories; /
our day-dreams /
thread and scatter /
in the four corners of the earth /
Narayanan Raghunathan
Thu, May 31st 2007, 23:33
A very special Tanka. Thank you.
Narayanan Raghunathan
Thu, May 31st 2007, 23:34
Thank you for all these slight corrections and for your kindness
Magdalena Dale
Fri, Jun 1st 2007, 01:22
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our day-dreams /
thread and scatter /
in the four corners of the earth /