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Without colors / Fără culori
Posted by Magdalena Dale Thu, May 31st 2007, 03:56 ::
Without colors unutterable longings, the roving day dream on the undulating sea flies with the wind in pursuit Romanian Fără culori doruri nicicând rostite, visul călător pe marea unduioasă căutându-te mereu

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Very Special Tanka ! "undulating sea" may be better. Just check! Thank you Magdalena.
Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, May 31st 2007, 23:36

You are right. It's better. Thank you!
Magdalena Dale Fri, Jun 1st 2007, 01:24

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