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Posted by Maria Tirenescu Tue, Aug 5th 2008, 16:46 :: English
At daybreak, a few red leaves under the collected pears... Several swallows in flight to the south.

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Tue, Aug 5th 2008, 16:48

De dimineata, câteva frunze rosii sub parul cules... Câteva rândunele trec în zbor spre miaza-zi.

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Just beautiful !
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 12:40

Thank you, Narayanan!
Maria Tirenescu Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 13:07

Thank you, Rebba, for the translation!
Maria Tirenescu Tue, Oct 14th 2008, 13:51

Maria I think you mean this (I checked the Romanian too) : Just correct [ third line ] "under the collected pear"... to "collected under the pear"... ~ If so, please correct At daybreak, a few red leaves collected under the pear... Several swallows in flight to the south.
Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Oct 14th 2008, 23:49

The fruits are collected or picked up, not the leaves.
Maria Tirenescu Wed, Oct 15th 2008, 07:21

Apologies Maria ~ I understand !! Should it be plural "pears" then?
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Oct 15th 2008, 07:33

Thank you, Narayanan! You are right.
Maria Tirenescu Wed, Oct 15th 2008, 10:10

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