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Bare branches / Crengi goale
 
Posted by Magdalena Dale Mon, May 21st 2007, 02:51 ::
The gloomy sky
spreads its shadow all over
the bare branches ...
the song of the magpie strikes
rhythmically at the window

   Romanian

Cerul mohorât
îşi lasă umbra peste
crengile goale ...
cântecul coţofenei
loveşte ritmic în geam


  

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Again Brilliant Magdalena ~ "at the window" ~ The "the" is necessary !
Narayanan Raghunathan Sun, Jun 17th 2007, 06:48  
  
I made the correction. Thank you, again!
Magdalena Dale Sun, Jun 17th 2007, 06:51  
  
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