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Bare branches / Crengi goale
Posted by
Magdalena Dale
Mon, May 21st 2007, 02:51 ::
The gloomy sky
spreads its shadow all over
the bare branches ...
the song of the magpie strikes
rhythmically at the window
Romanian
Cerul mohorât
îşi lasă umbra peste
crengile goale ...
cântecul coţofenei
loveşte ritmic în geam
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Again Brilliant Magdalena ~ "at the window" ~ The "the" is necessary !
Narayanan Raghunathan
Sun, Jun 17th 2007, 06:48
I made the correction. Thank you, again!
Magdalena Dale
Sun, Jun 17th 2007, 06:51
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