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| Posted by Maria Tirenescu Fri, Oct 27th 2006, 15:01 :: | |||
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Door’s open Snowstorm Get into the house. “Came to warm up?” Asks the child.
(romanian) Uşa-i deschisă… Zăpada viscolită Pătrunde-n casă. „Ai intrat să te-ncălzeşti?” O întreabă copilul. |
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| Very beautiful tanka Maria ~ "snowstorm Gets into the house". please correct the verb to, "gets". ~ the "the" before house seems to add to the rhythm- please check ~ | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Sun, Feb 18th 2007, 23:18 | |
| Thank you, I’ll rectify. Respectfully yours! | |
| Maria Tirenescu Tue, Feb 20th 2007, 13:03 | |