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A Lost Nest
Posted by
Rita Odeh
Mon, Dec 18th 2006, 23:40 ::
watching two
trees undress
the sparrow's
silent weeping for
a lost warm nest
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Nice one Rita ~ maybe a comma[,] after undress and another after "weeping" !
Narayanan Raghunathan
Sun, Mar 11th 2007, 06:22
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