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SHELTER
rain
Posted by
Ram Krishna Singh
Mon, Aug 7th 2006, 05:28 :: English
All night rain
the gaping roof
her shelter
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Very moving Haiku RK. It is beautifully minimal. I was just wondering whether the last line could be "her only shelter" for better rhythm!
Narayanan Raghunathan
Sun, Aug 13th 2006, 00:36
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