kovil mani oshai ~ vaanathil oru yaanai pol kaar meghangal [Thamizh, Tamil]
ambala mani naadam ~ vaanathil oru aanaye pol kaar meghangal [Malayalam]
mandir se mani naad ~ aakash me ek hathi ki tharah kaala megh samooh [Hindi]
mandira mani naadam ~ aakashe gajaroopi kari meghaani [Sanskrit]
the temple bells resound ~ elephant like on the sky, dark clouds
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elephant like on the sky,
dark clouds
Hi Narayanan,
Just visited your site and was simply taken aback by this ku.
Great imagery and impact.
But maybe that 'the' before temple is redundant
just a thought. . .
warmly,
kala
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